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Theorah, March 22nd, 2010, 3:53 pm

- Thank you for your comments guys, muchly appreciated! ^_^
LOL hillarious comment, Mamorii XDD
oooh thats awesome Kimbo, thats definitely where I've visited! It takes us like 12 hours to get there, but we know someone who lives there ^_^ I cant say exactly where it is though. All I remember is that it was near Fraiserburgh, and very in the middle of nowhere (as in our next door neighbor was about a mile away hehe). The person we stayed with owns a fishing lake and a paintball area though :D I like how rustic the Scottish countryside is, its very pretty but also daunting compared to where I live ^^
Thanks for all your comments, eternalbeliever! We're coming close to finishing now, so yes you will see an escape of some sorts :P
Sentiashinou, wow its so cool that a great artist like you would comment on my comic! XD

I'm cleaning up the panelling a bit now on these pages, I'm pencilling out with a ruler first, so hopefully things will look a bit neater. I'm trying desperately to figure out how to make things look neater/be pro standards, without having to rely on a computer and keep the whole watercolouring thing going. Got any ideas?? Do you think it looks ok the way it is, or does it look too messy to you? Do you accept it as being part of the style? Cos I'm wondering if maybe I'm just comparing to much to other comics that are digitally done, and that maybe they're so different there shouldnt even be a comparison...

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this comic is so cool so far! the colors are so pretty...and the art is lovable!

posted by enchantma on March 22nd, 2010, 4:04 pm





 

I don't know how I didn't get around to commenting on the last page. Hmmm. But I was going to say that I LOVE the escape plan! Lol! If they put a little padding around his middle, his chubby/round face wouldn't look too out of place! Ah, and my sister is quite adament about me keeping certain things in my stories too. :D And this is going to be interesting with at least 2 schemes going on at once!

I think I like the slightly neater panels on this page (and I really like the way this page is laid out). I wonder what it would look like if you tried to make the panels a bit darker in color around the edges- to keep with the flowy watercolors, but to sort of seperate it a bit? If that makes sense. Another thought- sometimes it seems like the characters don't stand out from the backround quite enough, like a darker bg might keep the same feel but make the characters pop a bit more? Haha, but my style is SO much different from yours, it might just be a personal preference that wouldn't fit your style at all! XD Take it with a grain of salt, I guess.

posted by Yubria on March 22nd, 2010, 8:17 pm





 

I do really like the layout of this page. I don't think I care one way or the other about how straight the lines are, but if using a ruler helps you make the layouts a bit... "denser", or cleaner, like this.. I say it's an improvement :3

Also I would comment more if I could think of useful things to say :x I do read this comic every time it updates which is more than I can say for a lot of comics on my favorites list xD;;

posted by sentiashinou on March 23rd, 2010, 9:53 am





 

Your work isnt messy at all, I think the way you use watercolours is amazing.I think its ok the way it is, but then there's no harm in making it more neater. Watercolour must be so hard to work with.And damn,your lineart is really perfect. :)
I don't compare this to digital comics or any sort of comic for that matter, its too unique! >.<

posted by eternalbeliever12 on March 24th, 2010, 7:45 pm





 

hahahahah cuz he's so damn intimidating xD lol but i totally get elexis here, i have problems with tht all the time.
and i knew she wouldn't give up tht easily, uhh if only ur brother knew, tht would be so scary hehe.
i can't wait to see wat she's goin to do

posted by Chirurotsu on March 26th, 2010, 8:31 am





 

and noo way ur colouring fits ur style, i think ur thinkin too much about it, if every comic look the same then there would be no original thing about them, so its really refreshin to see all kinds of ways to do them, really there is no right way to do comics :3

posted by Chirurotsu on March 26th, 2010, 8:33 am



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